假如你叫白云，从广告上得知广州某公司需要工程师。写信应聘。要求内容包含如下要点。

    (1) 姓名：白云，出生于广州市越秀区，年龄27岁。

    (2) 2001年毕业于中山大学，后来留学英国伦敦大学。

    (3) 2005年数学方面成果显著，获博士学位。

    (4) 英国一家公司想用高薪聘用他，但拒绝了。

(5) 为了报效祖国，于2006年毅然回国。（6）有数学天赋。

注意：

1）介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。文章首位已经给出，不算字数。

    [写作要求]

只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。

[评分标准]

      句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性。

Mr . Liu Jin, aged 37 , is working in a factory in Guangzhou as a chemical engineer . After graduating from Nanjing University in 1994 , he was sent to Tokyo University to study the chemical engineering . Through his hard work for 4 years , he achieved remarkable result in scinetific research and received a doctor’s degree in 1998 . A Japanese commany manager tried hard to invite him to work there and promised to give him a good salary but he didn’t accept that . In 1999 he returned to China without any hesitation , and he has made up his mind to devote al his life to our country .

参考答案：

Dear Sir,

How do you do? Through the ad .I know your company needs an engineer. I would like to have this job. Now let me introduce myself to you.

I’m Bai Yun, born in Yuexiu District, Guangzhou City, aged 27.After I graduated from Zhongshan University in 2001, I was sent to London University in the UK .Through hard work for 4 years, I achieved extraordinary achievement on maths because of my gift for maths and received a doctor’s degree. A British company tried hard to invite me with a good offer of salary, but I refused it. To devote myself to our China, I came back this year without any hesitation in 2006..

I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity. Thank you for your consideration.

I am looking forward to your early reply.

                                                        Sincerely yours,

                                                             Baiyun

基础写作注意事项：

1）能写几句就写几句，不留空白

l       2）主要评分要素包括内容的完整性和连贯性、句子结果的正确性。

l       3）每句占2.5分，每0.5分为一档

l       4）连贯性共占2.5分

l       5）多写或少写一个句子，扣一分，决不要自我发挥。

l       6）文不对题给0分，写出相关短语给0.5分。

l       7）每个句子要含有表中的信息，否则该句不得分。

l       8）不要生搬硬套，强加关联词。

注意“三写”，在规定的时间内完成

 针对性练习 二

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  情景说明：根据下列提示， 用英语给“中国日报”写一篇简讯， 要求内容连贯， 语句准确， 并包含如下要点：

写作内容：

１．姓名： 刘进， 年龄37岁，广州一家工厂的工程师。

２．1994 年毕业于南京大学， 后来留学日本东京大学，攻读化学工程。

３．1998年科研成果显著， 获得博士学位。

４．日本一家公司想用高薪聘请他， 但他拒绝了。

５．为了报效祖国， 他于1999 年回国。

写作要求：

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